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Sudhir Iyer
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0 posted 2003-06-30 05:00 AM


breathe

keep breathing
fill your chest with proud air
feel great about yourself
for your self is special
live like you enjoy to
allow the flame to burn

believe

keep believing
that somewhere in this world
there is a flickering light
shining bright
like a beacon
just for you

stand

keep standing
tall on your feet
for no one can pull you down
except you
in an depressed desire
of touching your shadow

let darkness be
lay down the ghosts to rest
let your dreams speak
while your eyes twinkle

let newfound joy spread
~spread with smiles

and you shall find yourself
spawned again
bathed in sunshine
dressed in yellow


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one of my friends needed some words of support and I scribbled most of this on the back cover of a magazine that showed the scene of a sunrise... just wanted to share   thanks

[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (06-30-2003 05:01 AM).]

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AniKay83
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1 posted 2003-06-30 05:04 AM


and you shall find yourself
spawned again
bathed in sunshine
dressed in yellow
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nice. love the last part.
peace.

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unwindyormind
VIVA
LA FUNK!!!

suthern
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2 posted 2003-06-30 04:47 PM


let newfound joy spread
~spread with smiles

These lines made me smile. *S* I like this, Sudhir... hope it helps your friend. *S*



littlewing
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3 posted 2003-06-30 07:53 PM


Sudhir:

There is no doubt your friend
is lucky indeed to have you
and by you posting this
you have given a gift to all of us
xxoo

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4 posted 2003-07-01 01:00 AM


a beautifully written hug
always, you find a way to convey a truth, gently

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5 posted 2003-07-01 01:08 AM


Here are your marching orders: Carry a magazine and a pen everywhere you go....let nothing escape!

I know this feeling of having to capture a poem any way you can, because I recently captured two poems with a blue crayon, on a restaurant's cartoon menu for children -- (A New Blonde Waitress and Balloon Hat, what else?)......

Each poem you post here impresses me in new ways.

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She
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6 posted 2003-07-01 03:18 AM


I wish I thought yellow was my color.



enjoyed this. A very positive message I think I needed.

"You put a stain on all of my good days."
Matchbox Twenty "Disease"

passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-07-01 04:05 AM


if I am not "the" friend...at least I am "a" friend
passing shadows
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8 posted 2003-07-01 04:06 AM


and I needed this, yes
Sudhir Iyer
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9 posted 2003-07-02 10:29 AM


Thanks a lot, my dear friends... and sometimes I am my friend too and I need some words too

regards,
Sudhir

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10 posted 2003-07-03 03:33 AM


it's good to write for you too, yes...glad you share with us
Sudhir Iyer
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11 posted 2003-07-09 05:11 AM


Thanks Dixie

regards
sudhir

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