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OwlPoet
Junior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 17
Fullerton, California, Urantia

0 posted 2003-06-29 10:27 PM

Circles

I don’t know about circles,
Concentric or not, no gold rings.
In my mind, or otherwise entwined.

I can’t say much about rings.
Circular and symbolic things.
Mine lie in my drawer, unworn.

I wonder about things.
Roundness and songs I sing.
The love we bring.

I lived my life in spring.
Birds on the wing, soaring.
Melodies on strings.

I am not the king.
I bring only the day.
Words that do not ring today.

This is the only prayer I bring..
A ring of words
A deeper thing.

WP – 6-29-03

Will Patrick

TasteOfOctober
Member

since 2003-06-24

Posts 94

1 posted 2003-06-29 10:30 PM

wow...thats great!!!!! (am i allowed to do that????the bit? [No, you're not allowed to do that. Edited by Sunshine] anyway, thats was a great piece man.

The only difference between the creative and the conformists is that the creative will not be conquered and the conformists already are.

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (06-30-2003 07:03 AM).]

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2003-06-29 10:32 PM

this is a wonderful write! enjoyed! Roniece Dawson-Bruce

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-06-29 10:34 PM

um...no...not allowed to do the f bit, no

I think it states in the guidelines for posting, but besides that, it's just rude. I think the worst four letter word we've used around here is damn.

Awesome write here Owlpoet!

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

4 posted 2003-06-29 11:21 PM

Really liked this one!

Great write

AnamCara
Junior Member

since 2003-06-25

Posts 41
Canada

5 posted 2003-06-29 11:36 PM

I like the flow of reading through your words...quite nice!

Love,
Angela

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2003-06-30 01:12 AM

"I am not the king.
I bring only the day."

I love the sound of this...

Bonfirelight
Member

since 2003-06-19

Posts 85
London, England

7 posted 2003-06-30 03:30 AM

like it

thanks

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

8 posted 2003-06-30 04:28 AM

Great write Owl!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2003-06-30 04:45 PM

I wonder about things.
Roundness and songs I sing.
The love we bring.

I've learned to watch for your work... I've not been disappointed. *S* This is superb. *S*

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

10 posted 2003-07-01 09:54 PM

"I can’t say much about rings.
Circular and symbolic things."

I beg to differ....You know much about many kinds of ring, as is shown by my own experience of you as a friend, and by the depth of what you've written here.

This ring of poets is blessed by such as you. Soooo....let's put this back at the top where it belongs!

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Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2003-07-01 10:04 PM

Excellent write...
Very much enjoyed...well done!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
you haven't been listening.~

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