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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2003-06-28 08:25 PM


The round mind of spring uncovered me with open mouth
Skipping somewhere between heaven and no place at all
Compassing about companions of light, candid sound of love
Obviously balanced, exhaling youth owning thoughts
Each one knows this species of good fortune’s charm
Combined with a supreme natural mind's eye extracting songs
Planting a dominion of love between the known and unknown
Emanating consuming strokes, translating visions of poems
A kind of infinity, lying in wait around the soul
White as a sand dollar’s comforting home
Vines wide and full, articulating secret joys
Immortal meanings comes from the tongue of this voice
We know about a higher life blown in the palms of wind
Sweet sounds, steadfast gaze, impeccable beauteous images
Hover upon the lips and heart like the powers of nameless phantoms
How mighty looks lift and glide defiant within twilight realm
Speaking comfort, uniting sacred arches, standing high upon the sea
Where all living emotions begin and end within your human music
Under the moon spreading dreams, sweet air mingling overpowering light
Where our life-blood faints with warm measureless tender nights
Where spirits speak by the pulse of clear spring mornings
Speaking a radiance of come hither songs smiling
Clinging melody fills the boughs of earth
Where liquid responses blossom green lawns, together with beloved eyes
Enchanted eddies play, owning swift wings of sweet desire’s joy
Intoxication, uplifting through a wandering portal of entangled buds
Where maddening wine of life, spills into each and every mortal
Where we walk upon the sea, chanting heaven’s veined emerald
Lovely apparitions twinkle mystically out of common things
So exotic, dear and gentle!


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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-06-28 08:29 PM


Where we walk upon the sea, chanting heaven’s veined emerald
Lovely apparitions twinkle mystically out of common things
So exotic, dear and gentle!
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very nice write,,, i really enjoyed the above lines in the write...

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more than voices
   of flattery
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Martie
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2 posted 2003-06-28 08:30 PM


LeeJ

"Lovely apparitions twinkle mystically out of common things
So exotic, dear and gentle!"

The above could be said of your poem...enjoyed!



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