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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-06-28 06:43 PM

Mark

tears stain
with drips
of salt
from heart

"i am out of estrogen and i have a gun"

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-06-28 06:53 PM

This is lovely.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2003-06-28 07:19 PM

(smiles) Oh Helen, this is heartfelt, sweet friend, I hope everything is OK, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

3 posted 2003-06-28 07:22 PM

I'm not sure what the tile means, but I loved the poem.

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

4 posted 2003-06-28 07:23 PM

these stains are stubborn, but they will go away.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

5 posted 2003-06-28 08:18 PM

Wow...!
Stunning.
Eric

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-06-28 08:36 PM

They always say
less is more
and you've proven the strength
of that statement
yet again.

Well done, Helen.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

7 posted 2003-06-28 09:01 PM

Beautiful....you are the ace of this kind of thing!

This one makes me want to go and try one .... but only after I finish my Duet verses....

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______________Ratleader______________

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-06-28 09:41 PM

God . . . How do you do this???
amazing Helen
you got the feeling down
thats for sure
xxoo

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

9 posted 2003-06-28 11:22 PM

Exquisite Write Lady!

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

10 posted 2003-06-28 11:34 PM

Helen

tearful etch
upon
the glass
strength
within
fragility

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

11 posted 2003-06-28 11:39 PM

Wind,
Stains leave a mark!

Helen,
They do but love washes them away. At least that's my theory.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

12 posted 2003-06-28 11:58 PM

i adore this poem...

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

13 posted 2003-06-29 12:15 PM

Beautiful. Just beautiful.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

14 posted 2003-06-30 09:50 AM

Tears of emotional wrench...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

15 posted 2003-06-30 12:49 PM

enough to drown the ocean out

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

16 posted 2003-06-30 01:16 PM

echo, echo

well done!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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