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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-06-28 06:34 PM

Between The Folds

words are
surrounded
grain by grain
of fine
leathered strength
and I tremble
with anticipation
turning pages
to where
I find you
as my
book mark

"i am out of estrogen and i have a gun"

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved

cynicsRus
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since 2003-06-06

Posts 591
So Cal So Cool!

1 posted 2003-06-28 06:45 PM

Wow!
Simplicity at its finest.
Thanks for sharing,

Sid

[This message has been edited by cynicsRus (06-28-2003 06:46 PM).]

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2 posted 2003-06-28 07:22 PM

(sigh) Oh Helen, this is beautiful, sweet friend, what a wonderful thought to think of a love is a bookprint in a hearts diary! (kiss on cheek) Yay, I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Wind

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3 posted 2003-06-28 07:23 PM

I can see the meaning of this clearly, but I'll leave others to their own interpretation. I loved this, you are a great poet.

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

Edder
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since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

4 posted 2003-06-28 07:26 PM

~sigh~ what a wonderful write...to have someone to turn to who holds a place for you in the pages of life

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

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in the shadows

5 posted 2003-06-28 07:32 PM

Beautiful...
...and, beautifully done.

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2003-06-28 07:57 PM

Nice little twist at the end
Nicely done and clever!

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

7 posted 2003-06-28 08:05 PM

OOOOH, Neat !

A nice little surprise.

Love it !

You keep getting better !

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

8 posted 2003-07-03 03:40 AM

I love your writings

Temptress

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since 1999-06-15

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Mobile, AL

9 posted 2003-07-03 04:51 AM

lovely writing..
I can never say enough about it, Lady.

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

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