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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2003-06-12 11:22 PM


The way you caress my skin
And hold me tightly to
Your body

The way you passionately
Kiss my lips
Over and over again

Your hugs are as if
A bear were hugging me
And never wanted to let go

Your fingers trace my face
As you look deeply into my eyes
And say "I love you."

Your touch
Is all I crave

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThunderMage
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1 posted 2003-06-12 11:24 PM


Definitely suits us Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

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2 posted 2003-06-12 11:26 PM


Loner.....loner....somehow that handle doesn't seem to fit just now.....

But it's the writing that raises the temperature in here...very nice...

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Canon_D_111
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3 posted 2003-06-12 11:36 PM


to know this touch once again...romance. poetry...love
passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-06-13 03:47 AM


good write
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5 posted 2003-06-13 10:11 AM


I like this very much, loner... the love just shines through every line. *S*
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2003-06-13 03:53 PM


Sensuality...James
QjQ
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7 posted 2003-06-13 04:05 PM


very loveing thoughts written,,,

QjQ

nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2003-06-13 04:12 PM


lovely thoughts Julie...keep them coming

M

vlraynes
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9 posted 2003-07-18 12:45 PM



Julie...this has to be one of your most lovely writes.
Beautifully penned.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"it is better to be a part of beauty
for one instant and then cease to
exist than to exist forever
and never be a part of beauty"
-- Don Marquis

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