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Ivy Rose
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0 posted 2003-06-28 01:09 AM



Soft, the Moon comes
breath of light
breathing on the heart
of my yearning.
The shadowy silhouettes
of blue stars
linger yet in my dreams.

Moon of delight
speaking my name
to the heart of one
who dreams in
silhouette like me.
Shadows caressing the day
of my moonlit passage.

My heart singing out,
Are you the forcasted one?
Are you the moonglow
that will shine within my soul?

Soft, the Moon comes
holding its breath
at the sight of new love
unfolding, at the radiance
of Love's light stepping out of
the shadow dreams of my night.

© Copyright 2003 Ivy Rose - All Rights Reserved
timothysangel1973
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1 posted 2003-06-28 01:10 AM


"My heart singing out,
Are you the forcasted one?
Are you the moonglow
that will shine within my soul?"

Beautiful Ivy Rose

I love it!!

TasteOfOctober
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2 posted 2003-06-28 01:11 AM


I love the way this flows and the vizualizations it breeds.

The only difference between the creative and the conformists is that the creative will not be conquered and the conformists already are.

SEA
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3 posted 2003-06-28 01:13 AM


the first and last stanzas are my favorites...oh but the pull this has on the heart stunning write
passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-06-28 10:01 AM


you know I love any poems about shadows

good write

Margherita
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5 posted 2003-06-28 10:06 AM


Very beautiful.
Are you the moonglow
that will shine within my soul?


Enjoyed.
Love, Margherita


Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2003-06-28 10:10 AM


Ivy,
Well done, enjoyed.

Bonnie j
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7 posted 2003-06-28 10:19 AM


Hello
Love that title. I'm a title person love to play with them.If you ever need help with a title come to me and I'll try to help.
Beautiful
Bonnie J aka Bon-Bon

ThisDiamond
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8 posted 2003-06-28 07:36 PM


A lovely write...so much your signature
TD

ethome
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9 posted 2003-06-28 07:54 PM


A beautiful write and very enjoyable read!
A Romantic Heart
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10 posted 2003-06-29 02:37 AM


Beauty, as beautiful as a rose your words are! I love moonlight poems Enjoyed your vision!
JamesMichael
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11 posted 2003-06-29 05:25 AM


Beautiful flow...james
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12 posted 2003-06-29 09:20 AM


Soft, the Moon comes
holding its breath
at the sight of new love
unfolding, at the radiance
of Love's light stepping out of
the shadow dreams of my night.


Ivy Rose, this is just the most beautiful thing. I absolutely love poems about love and the moon.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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13 posted 2003-06-29 10:47 AM


You have a way with the moon,  doncha!?!

When I see Ivy Rose,  I see a moon shining
brightly upon us. Always a pleasurable read.  


Earth Angel
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14 posted 2003-06-29 11:26 AM


Ivy, absolutely beautiful!


EA

Bill Charles
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15 posted 2003-07-04 03:40 PM


Ivy Rose - geez, and I almost missed this one. I love the moon and what it can do, and it can do much in the ways of romance...

BC

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