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Open Poetry #27

Essence of Evergreen

Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

0 posted 2003-06-28 12:09 PM

Essence of Evergreen

The scene before you is cast in a blue shimmering haze-
Iridescent blue candles flickering their mystical hue,
casting peaceful light into the sanctuary of your inner mind.
Spiraling Essence of Evergreen fills the air,
titillating all your delicate senses with the
fragrance of an earthy perfume.
The fireplace glows with warmth and fiery beauty-
The scent
mingling with the Evergreen is the light scent of the Pine.
Outside the snow, falling in layers of
delicate white lace.
Frosted steam covering the tiny windows-
Freezing as the frosty
wind blows with nature’s melody.
Relax .......................Enjoy
The Essence of Evergreen.

Bonnie J

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

1 posted 2003-06-28 12:12 PM

Wonderful imagery in this piece. Beautiful flow and beautiful words enhance this poem of the Evergreen ***Ivy Rose

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

2 posted 2003-06-28 12:13 PM

You drew me and held me there until the last line!!

Wonderful poem Bonnie!

Tima C

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2003-06-28 12:14 PM

wow wow wow, felt every word, and wanted more then anything to be there...with a warm fireplace and a light snow falling and the essence of the quiet of a new fallen snow all around...how lovely, thank you for the journey sis....wonderful poem. Luv ya, me

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-06-28 12:16 PM

just cool! beautiful!

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

5 posted 2003-06-28 12:56 PM

as always another bon bon classic,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

6 posted 2003-06-28 12:09 PM

Thanks everyone for your comments. It's going to take forever for me to catch up on all this lovely poetry.
Love Bon-Bon

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