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LeeJ
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0 posted 2003-06-27 10:16 PM


Overtures exceed prolonging where feelings support foliage of wine
We are makers as we go, fomenting thoughts, emitting rhymes
In nations round, embracing ceaseless arms, time’s provisions
Unfathomable wonder, slaves of ocean’s mighty canyons
Eyes forgetting tears, for the natural way
Now is high tide, where murmurs meet, rich energy blossoming
Flooding back from mazes spouting along with whatever ebbs
Comforting, the ear of nature whispering considerate
Simultaneously coupled, producing our bow
Shaping etiquette and various Bulova socials
Sense of connection with age groups long dead
Our park rangers and interim contracts
Perspectives of change, growing longer in a world increased
Interesting, this pace of spiritual trees leased
From whence enters a rich supply and likely speech
In addition, maybe even sequential determinists
Will stand up and spew our national insurance in sync
However, a guide will implement this invisible space
Through a hand in motion from your treasured face
So light the light and open doors
Create your image coupling shores
Expanding time across cultural zones
Will surely empower our inter-most homes

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Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-06-27 10:21 PM


Beautifully written, as always! Great write
QjQ
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2 posted 2003-06-27 11:39 PM


terrific write n read,,,  

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


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3 posted 2003-06-28 10:37 AM


Amazing, this gift we have, which we can
share across the oceans,  to all who read
these treasured words written so deeply
from in the soul of us.  

As are your words...

Thank You LeeJ...

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4 posted 2003-06-28 09:15 PM


I knew Seth Thomas.


Couldn't possibly have been the same person, but if I were writing him a eulogy, it would read much like this.

Maybe it goes with the breed called Seth....

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LeeJ
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5 posted 2003-06-29 10:52 AM


Thank you all for your kind comments...RatLeader...in this poem Seth Thomas represents a clock...smiles, thank you
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6 posted 2003-06-29 01:04 PM



...and the clock ticks on...

Nice write, Lee.  Thank you!

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