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Open Poetry #27

his lies killed her...

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-06-27 03:45 PM

the wind blows her hair
as she gets into her pickup truck
tears stain her beautifull face
his lies killed her
she turns the keys
and starts driving away
her bags are packed up in the back
his lies killed her
she drives until theres no where else to go
she steps out of the truck
she walks further into the vast desert in front of her
his lies killed her
she screams one last time
she screams for all those hurt
there is silence
his lies killed her....

papabear
Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 102
Atlanta, GA

1 posted 2003-06-27 04:41 PM

powerful! very well done...

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2003-06-27 07:18 PM

Hi, very potent message...I don't know that "his" lies killed me, but most assuridly killed the relationship and any chance of trust or belief in him....it sorely hurts doesn't it. A lesson for all of us...even me....thank you for sharing.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

3 posted 2003-06-28 04:30 AM

lies can kill and ruin a good thing,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

4 posted 2003-06-28 04:34 AM

very good.

and very true

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

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