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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
It's like dead daffodils with you It's like the sun turned his face And shouted obsenities Because he's having a bad day. Everyone needs their days And most eventually pay For the things they did On that day of crash and burn for no reason. But you You have not paid enough They sent you to the wrong place You belong in jail Girls are not little toys You used her to feed your Disgusting hunger. . . . . ..... . . . . . . . . Apologize to me? No. Apologize to the Judge who made such a Horrible mistake. Apologize to the planet You've burned. A scorch. You are a walking stain Among this earth. The only place I would Be happy to see you Is in hell, Where you belong. Don't give me that crap about Rapists change. Burning the rose you gave me Three years ago And waitsted my time Don't speak to me don't look At me or any other woman without Pause, without total and complete writhing pain Never look at another girl Without wanting to kill yourself. There are no words whatsoever For how sick you make me feel No explaination, stop asking me "Do you want to talk about this?" No. I want you to leave. And go to hell. And never come back. I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. --Chang Tzu [This message has been edited by KoKo (06-27-2003 10:25 AM).] |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
WOW!....I'm still trying to think of something to say! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
KoKo: this is an amazing write - powerful words here! Roniece Dawson-Bruce |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I hope he goes to his own personal hell every day of his life...and I hope with all my heart, you can leave yours forever....  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
I can't imagine... If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
damn..... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
 I agree totally with what you say about him!!  Hugs to you  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very powerful write KoKo.. Hugs to you dear friend.' ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Thanks everyone I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I believe that there is Justice...I believe that no one gets away with anything if they abuse another...if not paid in this life the bill is still due in the spiritual world...James |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
So powerful...this is really such an important poem. Eric |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
POWERFUL piece. Great read!!! |
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