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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-06-26 05:44 PM


I'd like a little coffee
with my sugar and cream,
stare outside the window at a
parking lot full of snow.
Denial, my mind, it falls like
a frozen flake.
And I
become
the snow.

Trees sway in a soundless wind,
abound, my mind, it reticulates like
the veins of a leaf.
And I
become
the tree.

A river flows with great fury.
restless, my heart, it pours like
a maddened liquid.
And I
become
the river.

My fingers intertwine with
the lipstick stains on my cup.
Perplexed, my soul, it decomposes like
a motionless reflection.
And I
become...

© Copyright 2003 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
timothysangel1973
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1 posted 2003-06-26 05:53 PM


Love the last line......

Wonderful write Kaoru!

I loved it!


exhale
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since 2003-06-13
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2 posted 2003-06-26 05:55 PM


wow..and thats all i can say because it was just so powerfull, i love it!


secretlife
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Grean Earth ,,,
3 posted 2003-06-26 05:55 PM


waaaaw

You became a good writer too..

Very nice words..

I love it..

Thanks alot..

Hugssssss

papabear
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4 posted 2003-06-26 06:35 PM


well done...
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