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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa 
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untitled yes because everyone needs one everyone is one we are not titled I am not entitled to have a pinion I dont want opinion I dont crave the million but I love diversity I am human and I wash my human off in the sea of humanity I hate diversity I want everyone to think like me.... that is to sputter... "I want everyone to like everyone who is like me"...said everyone including this ONE see? I want to be huge and include you all.because I believe in love I believe in bloodshed and politics I want to love those that I hate and hate those that I love and I DO I DO because I am you I love diversity because I am learn-ed and bookish and I think alot but damn those people that got stuck in my mundane they really piss me off...oh no I meant they are so SMALL minded like not me like me I mean like you guys geez I am different because I think just like a human not like all you people you all think different like humans or something equally beautiful I love peace I'd like a piece of war with icecream melting on it and it makes me think of Mom..because she is the greatest...she only hated 4 people today so God Bless Her I want everybody to be the same because then I will love you all no more than I love you all now you know Hitler was the greatest because he hated all the same which reminds me to say that power is a good thing because we can do so much good DAMAGE with it we can be more civilized and save lives and kill better and increase life expectancy and feed people except for the magnificent animals we destroy in the process they really need to understand that we are here to be there benefactor consumers those closest to the marrow of LIFE.... beings that have no say because they say everything with every moment of their lives and I love being human..because I get to hate myself I get to hate you all..for being the incredible meeting point of millions and millions of years of God's love and vision his evolution of Christ Physics and saintly brains reaching crying out to get some DAMN light shed on this chaotic mess that I have to live with you have to live with you feel and you think and you do it all over again because we love we love to hate we are human and that is the corkscrew that will open this final piece of mail oh it's just from Me asking Me if I want a lower rate of Me to spend more Me to live the DREAM of us |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
"because we love we love to hate" Very Powerful words Brian Thanks for sharing! Tima Some women wait for something to change and nothing does, so they change themselves. |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
Very interesting write. I like.  quatro |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
could not have said it better myself |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think I lost our Bri-guy somewhere in all of that...  feel better now?  [This message has been edited by Sunshine (06-26-2003 09:44 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I should have known. I was sitting here wondering why this was untitled and you explain just that in the opening lines. grin. Y'got me! This is total stream of conscious--and I'll be back to figure it out when I AM conscious--expletive hangover...  |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Well dude, I was able the follow this stream all the way over the falls..... Damned fine spewing! First rate, really! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Pure power bri loved this |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile. I am now reminded of why I gave up cocaine. And I know you passed this off as silly, but it's actually quite a parody, bri... and this? I adore: "which reminds me to say that power is a good thing because we can do so much good DAMAGE with it" so much good damage. I love the way you think--  love the run on sentence structure--it emphasizes the seemingly contradictory quality of your content. You're brilliant yanno. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
brian serenity stole my favorite line and some of my thoughts too. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
now that's what I'm talking about... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bri: This should replace our national anthem seriously . . . *shaking head ay your pure and honest heart and sheer intelligence* in awe . . . again xxoo |
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