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Just Thinking |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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heart raw unjust fears roam with their heavy feet commanding thunder in walls of skin climbing slippery branches of bone crushing me from inside out. My love cannot breathe if anger clouds thicken the room. You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Great write, the imagery rocks. |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
How often I feel this way!! Wonderful piece of work!  Tima |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, this is stellar. the imagery does in fact rock. and the entire piece came together nicely... BTW...thanx for the bump! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very true |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
True that! Enjoyed. Maree  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
missing ...you...h |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
True true true! ARCTIC WIND |
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