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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2003-06-24 01:20 PM



Summer Lament

Weeds, weeds,
beautiful weeds,
doing all their
dastardly deeds.

Providing me
with exercise,
finding ways
to improvise,
wishing I
could exorcise
their evilness,
vitality,
but alas,
it’s reality

That they shall always
circumvent
my attempts,
through malcontent,
to rid them of
their holding fast
chewing up
the wilderness.

Of course
if I should only sit
within the joy
of sweet respite,

would I not wither
as the flowers
that fight the weeds
through all the showers
and grasp for soil
beneath their feet
to their demise
a sad defeat?

©June 24, 2003

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2003 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-06-24 01:44 PM


Virginia I know how you feel..
It's a thankless-back-breaking-job!
I'd leave them but I hate to see my flowers choke.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

scorpio
Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178
right...there
2 posted 2003-06-24 01:48 PM


Weeds the bane of all gardeners...enjoyed this..now back to my weeding..

believe in what your heart feels...

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
3 posted 2003-06-28 01:25 AM


good write  n read,,,
timothysangel1973
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4 posted 2003-06-28 01:27 AM


My husband says..."Weed the garden."  

"Why don't we just start over, at this rate, we could just pull out everything else instead!"

Somehow, he didn't find that as amusing as I did!

Wonderful write, and YES I can relate!

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