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Bonfirelight
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 85
London, England

0 posted 2003-06-24 07:28 AM


thank you all for your kind welcomes   its a happy place you have here. unlike where i am right now!


Amid wall-of-noise bustling
And brown-lunch-bag rustling
the canteen smell solitude
and this MY table atttude
Is the only needle in a field of haystacks
sat down laid back
eyes closed
relaxed
imagine this city razed to the ground
leaving this one horse in this ghost town


[This message has been edited by Bonfirelight (06-24-2003 10:01 AM).]

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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
1 posted 2003-06-28 01:32 AM


nice write  n read,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


timothysangel1973
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since 2001-12-03
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Never close enough
2 posted 2003-06-28 01:37 AM




Hey join us anytime...we are open 24/7 (I know that because I am addicted to this place!)

Wonderful write

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