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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-05-01 11:07 AM



Only A Body


Only a body and nothing more.
No one has a clue to what is inside
this mind of more than fifty years.
I have given up on warring
over the terms that make up my life.

I have decided to live exactly as
those close to me expect me to.
It was a concerted effort to try to
wage a campaign  to combat
this depression that wishes to claim me.

But I am only a body and nothing more.

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2003-05-01 11:17 AM


It does feel like we are at war with ourselves sometimes!
I suppose because there is always something worth fighting for.

Don't you ever surrender yourself Maur~
Just a body?  Hardly~


nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2003-05-01 12:15 PM


You are a good friend Lori...but I see my daily reflection and there is nothing there but what is on the surface...and even that is not pleasing enough anymore.
Magnus
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3 posted 2003-05-01 10:02 PM


Hardly is correct....for from within that
body...no less beautiful than the words that
escape your pen....comes forth a river of
magnificence...

whiskey
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4 posted 2003-05-01 10:06 PM


I think we all have felt this way at one time in our lives, an empty face staring back at ourselves.

Julie

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2003-05-02 10:52 AM


Magnus, thank you, I appreciate your responding and kind words. It's good to have you back.

Julie, sometimes it's not the empty face but the lack of expression that can haunt one.

thank you
M

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