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quatro
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0 posted 2003-04-29 05:55 PM


Freedom

Sitting here all alone
wishing you were here;
thinking back on yesterday
when nothing seemed quite clear.

But nothing can disturb me
in my hours of deep thought;
for with you I will always be
it is something I have sought.

The bright orange sun is shining
the baby blue sky is in view;
the roaring sea still roars
while I sit and think of you.

The years have gone by there's nothing left
I'm just a pile of dust;
and very gently the wind blows me away
and all my childhood lust.

quatro

© Copyright 2003 Naome James - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2003-04-29 06:02 PM


Welcome to Passions! This is beautiful, even though sadness is quite strong here. Every day is a new beginning I would say. Childhood held many dreams and it is never too late to realize some!
Deeply felt.
Love, Margherita

Enchantress
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2 posted 2003-04-29 06:41 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Much enjoyed your first post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

carol
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since 2003-01-25
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3 posted 2003-04-29 07:07 PM


I loved your poem and Welcome to Passions

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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4 posted 2003-04-29 07:15 PM




(big hugggsssssss) This is a very emotionally tugging debut, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you but know you are never dust, the nutrients enrich the soil and the flowers will bloom again! Welcome to Passions, sweet Naome, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much, and be sure to check your E-mailf or a very special greeting from all of us here at Passions just for you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Naome, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-29-2003 07:16 PM).]

Sunshine
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5 posted 2003-04-29 07:30 PM



Welcome to Passions.  You're going to find a lot of time for thought, for reflection, for writing, for sharing.  Get ready to enjoy our Family of Friends!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

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just out of reach
6 posted 2003-04-29 08:00 PM






Enjoyed your first post!!

quatro
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since 2003-04-29
Posts 392
Galveston, Texas
7 posted 2003-04-30 11:44 AM


Thank you all so much for your kind words and for such a warm welcome.  I feel like I am home after being lost for a long while.

I look forward to being inspired by your talents as it is I have not written in about two years and have a sincere urge to write.

To my new found friends....THANK YOU.

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia
8 posted 2003-05-06 07:26 PM


Hello Naome

A fabulous first post at PIP and a very warm welcome from me, far across the miles. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and I'll look forward to reading more of your inspiring words.

"The countless generations
like Autumn leaves go by.
Love only is eternal,
love only does not die......"

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

whiskey
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9 posted 2003-05-06 07:36 PM


Very nice first post, Welcome to passions I look forward to reading more of your pieces.


Julie

littlewing
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10 posted 2003-05-06 11:55 PM


quatro:

nice entrance!
welcome to PIP!
this is amazing
xxoo

quatro
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since 2003-04-29
Posts 392
Galveston, Texas
11 posted 2003-05-07 01:08 AM


Suetang,

Thank you for reading and posting. You are truly an inspiration to me.

Naome
quatro

quatro
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12 posted 2003-05-07 01:09 AM


Thanks Julie,

I feel welcome here and am always looking for inspiration.

Naome

quatro
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Galveston, Texas
13 posted 2003-05-07 01:10 AM


Littlewing,

Thank you for reading and posting.  You are very appreciated.

quatro

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