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The Joining - a duet
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The Joining - a duet |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 The Joining It’s a deep and residing Internal throbbing, When a poet is museless, No pondering, no wandering, a Quagmire of quandary, Where thoughts are amiss But rambling strife rampant, Knowing you want to go ~ somewhere ~ Not knowing where it might lead, Or even why one would take That road… Yet, that road is taken, In search of what’s missing inside, To where spirits are held Traveling in thoughts on tides Floating into the heart of dreams To rest in that special ~someplace~ Where a soul can find peace And even a muse can find sweet release... Perhaps it’s a ying and yang ideal Half of me in search of muse, Half of muse, in search Of me? Possibly, quite possibly… Does she follow in my footsteps, Or am I in search of her? Would he know me by my touch, Or does he rest, Quite assured, that I might stumble And in my plummet, Be lifted by my muse’s arms Ascend to highest summit… Reaching for a plateau Where poet and muse become As one, A subtle realization That this journey together Has just begun.... Oh, does she read my secret thoughts, Does he feel all that I hold inside? We shall walk this path together ~Searching~ Muse and poet... Side by side. Muse, my muse, abide with me, Step by step into destiny, Whether we walk, or fly, Shine, or cry, Muse, my muse, please, abide with me. ~*~ Gentle Spirit & Sunshine 04-28-03 [This message has been edited by Sunshine (04-29-2003 02:12 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
*Floating into the heart of dreams* very nice thoughts and a fabulous thought of mind, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh and you thought you wouldn't mention 35000 posts.....I dont think so...  thank you sweet lady....forever hugs.......I must have had my momma's will |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Well done, Lovely Ladies. Gloom |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Beautifully written, Sunshine & Gentle spirit... Enjoyed. Sunkissed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ohmygosh!!! Bravo!! Karilea and Donna.. Your muses play so well together! Oh this is just so lovely... A keeper..and may we be gifted with more? ~Smiles & Hugs to you both~ ~ Congratulations Sunshine on 35,000 posts!! ~ |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
This describes the need to write so well. And your writing blended so beautifully, it left me guessing just who wrote what. Great write! Shenachie [This message has been edited by Bridget Shenachie (04-29-2003 03:29 PM).] |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Beautiful.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Just lovely ladies. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Exquisite! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Just a beautiful duet by two beautiful ladies, that I am so proud to know. Bravo! hugs to both of you, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea and Donna...What beauty is held in two pens of muse...Loved this.  |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
This was so sweet. I loved this. Great job both of you. If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunshine - my goodness, what a stunning write by two of Passions mostest poets. Lovely ladies, you are both great... BC |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
 Bravo!! Bravo!! Beautiful, ladies. More? I hope so.  Hugs, Ethel Karilea, congratulations on 35,000!!  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A stunning duet!.. you make an excellent team  I couldn't pick who was who. adding this to my library. Maree |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I was 'amused' to find I'm not the only one with the lack of muse....youse done good here sunnyone....luvya..Toe..hope you're doing well.. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Each line resounds Reaching beyond bounds A paean to one who leads us Two minds joined in joyous Offering thought that hounds Your writing oozes into the soul, warming and gentling. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Wow! Thank you all so very much for the kind words. This duet was a pleasure to write and I can not thank Karilea enough for the honor of writing with such a talented writer and fine friend. Thanks all! Peace ~D~ I must have had my momma's will |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sorry folks, but the honor was simply all mine. As busy as Donna has been - as mute as she claims her MUSE to have been, we coincidentally stumbled over a line that we both had to have...and the situation being what it was, the muse held our hands together while we traveled this wayward road... so thank you all for your generous comments and time to read, and understand what's it like when two poets won't let go of the same line...  ... Magic! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, Karilea and Donna, quite magic! And 35000 posts just leaves me speechless ... 35000 sunrays touched as many souls dancing on poet's wings through this enchanted forest known as Passions in Poetry. Love, Margherita  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Do I detect the trademark of another poetess who blended well with the Sun.... Nicely done lady. That rascal muse!!! |
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