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Aenimal
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0 posted 2003-04-28 12:18 PM


Barefoot on
the grassy knoll
around the
ribbons of Maypole

Dancing by
the light of flame
of the blessed
fires Beltaine

You the
beautiful Mayqueen
I your handsome
Jack In Green

Underneath
the sprouting leaves
In celebration
of May Eve

Happy birthday (of sorts)hope you like?



© Copyright 2003 raphael giuffrida - All Rights Reserved
Justbleu
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1 posted 2003-04-28 12:24 PM


Enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2003-04-28 12:49 PM


yes, me liketh
oops, did you mean me?

wranx
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3 posted 2003-04-28 01:22 PM


You capture it, Raff.

Going-a-Maying.

Happy birthday Kacy!!

Midnitesun
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4 posted 2003-04-28 01:25 PM


Ed, HAHA, mother nature's bday maybe...Kacy's is in November

but I dance all year long

wranx
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5 posted 2003-04-28 01:30 PM


Oh, that's right! It's Ratleaders' birthday!

(Happy (late) Earthday then)

vandana
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6 posted 2003-04-28 02:14 PM


enjoyed
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7 posted 2003-04-28 02:19 PM


wonderful Raph--you really did catch the Celtic rhythms in this--and I love the way you captured the feel of a "chant"--

you guys are naturals!

and yep, I'm gearing up for the day over here!

Hugs, you. Thanks again for getting in the spirit of the season--it IS my favorite holiday!

Aenimal
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8 posted 2003-04-28 11:09 PM


Thanks everyone was a fun ittle write, not a rhyming man m'self but it wouldn't work any other way and wanted to capture that celtic essence..thanks again for reading
littlewing
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9 posted 2003-04-29 02:49 AM


amazing write Raph - from what I have read on it - you have captured it well - as always - xxoo
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10 posted 2003-04-30 07:03 PM


omg raph! Im like in love *swoons* and no Im totally sober no wine yet

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Aenimal
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11 posted 2003-05-01 02:55 PM


Thanks Sue I'm new to the whole deal but was inspired quickly by the though of it..i love me celts

Kris you make me smile i gotta say

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