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inspiredpoetwriter
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0 posted 2003-04-27 11:50 PM



I wake up to see the sunrise
To see the beauty I see in you
I wake up to feel the memory of us
Blowing in the wind across the sky/

I wake up only to feel thy softness of your
body slightly close to mine, I close
My eyes to see the sparkle, the passion
I saw in them lastnight.

I wake up thinking what joy your
Laughter brings its music to my
Eyes as the gray clouds move away
I wake up smiling what this woman
Has done to me I wont give her up.

I Wake up to see the heavens shining
Through our window blessing up with
love that has my heart filled with lust
Thats running over the side.

I wake up 6:00 in morning my
favorite time of day along with
my lover always connected to me.

© Ang "03"

© Copyright 2003 Care - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2003-04-27 11:54 PM




(smiles) This is such a beautiful love poem, sweet friend, I'm happy I could help with the title and may each new dawn bring you a comfortable signal! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Ericc
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2 posted 2003-04-28 04:47 PM


Beautiful.
Eric

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3 posted 2003-04-28 05:02 PM


Now that is a very nice way to wake up, at any time of day.
Nicely written!

junemac
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4 posted 2003-04-28 05:38 PM


this is lovely, so loving and beautiful.
xjune x

vandana
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5 posted 2003-04-28 07:45 PM


beautiful

J. K. Mitchell
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6 posted 2003-04-28 08:03 PM


This is so beautiful.  Truly touching!

"Cuidado con mi corazon."--R. Martin

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