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P.R.C
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 40
Hull, England

0 posted 2003-04-27 01:18 PM


I would be your shoulder to cry on
Your friend to depend on
If only I was there
I would never leave
I cannot help how much I care
Nor can I help wearing my heart on my sleeve

You touched my heart,
You made me care to the depths of my soul
Before I knew you, there was this space
It was all empty and cold
Now it is full of thoughts of your smiling face
Full of my love for you,
Its there forever we me every second, growing old

Day after day
Those little things that I adore
In ways I cannot say
They make me love you more

I want to be with you and give you a hug
You are like some sort of drug
I crave you every minute of the day
You opened the gateway
Unintentionally I fell for you
Feeling these feelings ever so true

It hurts me that you are away
I dream of being with you each and every day
One day I want to meet you
I know that we almost certainly wont
But about my wish to meet you, you do not have a clue
Over and over again you do taunt
Leaving me wanting you more


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Mysteria
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1 posted 2003-04-27 02:17 PM


Tells me you are missing out on a lot by not trying to make a connection with this person - you will never know until you try and it could be love and even better - a friend!  I enjoyed this and it speaks to so many that hold back when a simple jesture would open the communications.

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 2003-05-01 11:45 AM


Lovely poem and I agree with Mysteria.....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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