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Fariegirl
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0 posted 2003-04-27 11:18 AM



Oh no, there is a monkey on my back,
Some say that it is the worry of my grades,
Some say the worry that I may slack,
Some say the worry of grenades,
What do I say?,
Who asked?, you?,
I say,
Take him back to the zoo.

© Copyright 2003 Kathryn Duncan - All Rights Reserved
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-04-27 12:00 PM


LOL, good idea....just take him back.
QjQ
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2 posted 2003-04-27 12:48 PM


cute write!!  

"It matters not how you answer, It matters only if i hear you"

~*BayBee*~
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3 posted 2003-05-18 11:53 PM


Great poem Kat! Keep up tha good work and u still gotta write me that poem u promised me! Great job!

~*Holly*~

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4 posted 2003-05-19 04:57 AM


yep!
Nan
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5 posted 2003-05-19 07:16 AM


Chuckling - Monkeys don't make great pets anyway - They're much too confrontive...
GG
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6 posted 2003-05-19 07:31 AM


lol!
humorous, but holds truth! If we just let go of the burdens on our back then we don't need to worry about them!
Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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Tamarac Fla
7 posted 2003-05-19 07:47 AM


Fariegirl
Funny, enjoyed.

HorseToBlue
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8 posted 2003-05-20 04:02 AM


Wonderful!!!
I feel much lighter now.
Thanks!

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