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darkness drifting level--I
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darkness drifting level--I |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Darkness-darkness... dream the wound blood-spotted on orange moon tricks of eye and compromise darkness drifting silver tune across the mottled skin of beat darkness dings on tambourine tossing coins of rhythm--shine... Darkness-dark in dirge entwined fingers held to ring the bell Dinner served of sacrifice smell the blood in drip on coal assurance of it is all right... Level now within the gauge bubble dancing mocking rage of here and there and back again-- until the bubble bobs the sane middle road of certainty-- Darkness-Darkness make me tame and feel the sweat in pour from knees in the crease of "almost there" as the salt annoints my feet... Drifting darkness shadows play shivering the body--flayed as ribbon of the past appears Dark me dreaming now--away... Notice now the lakes of moon... proof that once, water was there. Or is it just a crater'd beach-- grit of sand in grind of bare where darkness dreamed to be a light-- the dark makes candlelight sacred... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
wow..hugs you |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you for the wow, Raph. I always did say that was the best reply... just..."wow"... tsk...to me. Nevermind... [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (04-27-2003 03:46 AM).] |
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Guardurthoughts Member
since 2001-10-16
Posts 66 |
Its a wonder what one can construe from a poem that is so wonderfully written. Your words unfolded into a moving picture in my mind so clear and fluid. It may not of been the story of what you wrote but I thank you for the vision the was bestowed upon me by your powerful write.  Erica~~~Gaurdurthoughts~~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I must be in a mood tonight...this is really  empty feeling |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
K: as the salt annoints my feet... . . . sacred hmmm - I am starting to understand you This frightens me lol Beautiful write - what I got of it xxoo |
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