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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-04-14 06:24 PM


Until Then I'll
Always Be With You

Once there was one.
Then there was two.
Then you went away.
Then I missed you.

You could come back to me.
That is if you wanted to.
Until then there will be one
that will always think of two.

JamesLee
April14
2003



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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2003-04-14 09:45 PM


A true blue tale.  Joyce
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2 posted 2003-04-14 10:57 PM




(big hugggsssssss) I share this kind of feeling, dearest friend, fear not, for soon that one thinking of you will find you! (sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Larry C
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3 posted 2003-04-14 11:00 PM


Not easy I'm sure. Poignant write James.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2003-04-15 04:40 PM


Thank you Joyce, Noah and Larry for the nice response...James
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5 posted 2003-04-22 09:41 PM


Simply said, yet with so much heart.  How I wish someone would talk to me that way!!!!
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6 posted 2003-04-22 09:51 PM


James. this is a really sweet poem.
I enjoyed reading it.  
Hugs,
Ethel

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7 posted 2003-04-22 09:54 PM


Very nicely done James...
hope all goes well.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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