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Open Poetry #26

She's So Neat

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-04-26 07:41 AM

She's So Neat

I feel comfortable around her.
No pressure to perform.
No reason to pretend.
I just be myself
and I fit right in.
I'm glad she understands
and let's me be myself
and accepts me for who I am.
I'd love to spend more time
with her and melt into her
arms so soft and sweet.
She seems to share my feelings
and that's why she's so neat.

JamesLee
April 26
2003

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-04-26 08:28 AM

James,
Thats pretty neat, enjoyed.

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

2 posted 2003-04-26 09:11 AM

Neatly written James..

believe in what your heart feels...

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-04-26 10:26 AM

James:

hoping you keep that fire by your side
I liked this a lot xxoo

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-04-26 03:16 PM

Thank you Seymour, scorpio and littlewing for the nice responses...James

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

5 posted 2003-04-29 09:17 AM

This is a neat poem.....
Enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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