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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-04-24 07:31 PM


I feel so lonely
When night falls
Nobody to love me
Or hold me tight at all

Life feels like it is going in slow motion
And I feel a notion
That I will never feel love
Even if I took a potion

I'm Blue
My life is a bore
With nobody
To love me

Cold hands means a warm heart

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Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
1 posted 2003-04-24 07:34 PM


I can tell you with all honesty that the magic of love is out there waiting for you...do not give up hope for it comes when least expected...in the meantime...take joy in the wonderful talent of writing you have for you touch the heart of those who read your words.....Well done.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2003-04-24 08:22 PM


When I feel blue I try to get out there and find my place because in most cases as I view my position from a distance the place I was at was not my place...I just thought it was...no body else agreed...and I'm looking for agreement...or compatibility...
I listen to the CD called Eiffel 65 Europop...it has some uplifting music...touches on the subjects of being blue...at least it pacifies me...James

MikeFessel
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since 2003-04-19
Posts 321
Brooklyn, NYC, USA
3 posted 2003-04-24 08:33 PM


Sigh...I know the feeling, believe me.

Great poem, though so sad.

            Mike

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4 posted 2003-04-24 08:35 PM


Blue or not, it's good to see you.....and to appreciate the growing strength you're showing as a writer.

though for the life of me, I can't fathom the cause of this particular distress.... seems impossible.....

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whiskey
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since 1999-12-28
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Australia
5 posted 2003-04-24 09:17 PM


Feeling blue is a emotion I think all of us have felt at one time or another. Just believe in Love and it will find you, usually out of nowhere when you least expect it very nice

Julie

ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
6 posted 2003-04-24 11:07 PM


You'll always have my heart Julie. That'll never change.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

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