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inspiredpoetwriter
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since 2002-01-05
Posts 104
Minnesota

0 posted 2003-04-23 07:57 AM


You carved your name in to my heart
Touched me with your roaming finger tips
They set me on fire, kissed me with you
lips sending your love right to the core
Of my soul.

Your my one
Your my love a
True angel from the heaves
Your the other half of me.

You carved your name in to my heart
Holding me at night in your arms I feel right
Feeling the drum of your heart beat gives
Me faith,beyond the sheet's we tangle there
Waiting is my place next to you.

Your my one
Your my love a
True angel from the heavens
Your mine no one is stealing you
From me.

You carved your name in to my heart
We clicked so fast, it felt right loved
Another just like that, we're tight open about
Everything, I trust you bringing your ahnd
In to mine I know we're meant to be
Together.

Your my one
Your my love a
True angel from the heavens
You carved your name in to my heart
I'm your's forever beautiful.

© Care A. Strom "03"


© Copyright 2003 Care - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-04-23 08:19 AM


inspiredpoetwriter
Sounds like your bleeding to death, LOL
enjoyed the read.

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-04-23 10:49 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is lovely, sweet friend, you always write such wonderful artistic visions and may you make a painting that represents those initials of that special someone forever! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

And that's the most wonderful thing about creating. It will always be a mystery.

***Shakira***

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
3 posted 2003-04-30 02:39 PM


Other than a few little typos this is nice....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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