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Black Swan
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since 2003-02-05
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on the moon

0 posted 2003-04-14 06:23 AM


He's got a scorpio moon
hides things behind his eyes
you never know 'till your alone
you'll never know the half of it
until you hear it from someone else

Unsure about
seeing him again
surprised and amused
intimidated
looking into his eyes
hoping for something to move

I don't know the whole story
bits and pieces fall into my view
I guess i'll just sit back and wait
wandering in a fog of obscurity

Trying to be mysterious
hoping to see me snap
scorpio moon
sitting back
ever so calmly
playing it cool
but you knew i would hear it
from someone sooner or later

you knew

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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2003-04-14 07:16 AM


Ah, yes, I can really get into this one!! I'm a Scorpio, and sometimes we tend to have a hard time letting those we care about into our innermost thoughts. But once you break through, you'll find everything you need...oh, this is such a great write, my friend!!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
2 posted 2003-04-15 08:50 PM


ahahaha you just described someone I know very well - a scorpio - amazing   xxoo
penned it well

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
3 posted 2003-05-13 10:11 AM


I have scorpio sun and this captured any scorpio well....
Enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2003-05-13 11:19 AM


Well, you brought all us Scorpios out into the open, but sans stingers.
Enjoyed the write.

Deep_Inside
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since 2002-02-14
Posts 377
i can't stop hiding
5 posted 2003-05-13 12:39 PM


hi talia this poem was vary good it has a lot to say. it's kinda wired but any way i'll ttyl
i have to tell you about when i cheked out for a while. i secared all the people in my house.
it was funny

Ani Zen
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since 2003-05-08
Posts 12
Ottawa, Ontario, Canada
6 posted 2003-05-13 12:48 PM


I'm a scorpio as well....and you did a wonderful job of capturing the essence of the sign....We're horrible for enshrouding people in mystery....you expressed this idea well.....good read!
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