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Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

0 posted 2003-04-20 09:10 PM

Message/egasseM
She wants to tell you
it’s okay, this dying;

she wishes an end
to your crying,
wants to send your tears
to fill the sea.

She knows it’s an image
keeping eyes salty-wet:
her body’s last breath
leaving.

She’d erase those last days,
replace them with worthy ones -
wax-sealed, yellow-flower pressed,
love’s book.

© 2003 Core

© 2003 Core

[This message has been edited by Corinne (04-21-2003 07:28 PM).]

Dragon Mistress
Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 289
Washington, USA.

1 posted 2003-04-20 09:17 PM

awww...that seems so sweet
Tanya

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-04-20 09:33 PM

...
If she could, she’d erase
those last days from you,
saving the good memories
into a book of her love.

She wants to tell you
it’s okay, this dying.
...

If you're listening,
this is exactly what they say
Corinne...

I am happy when you call me
friend...
I am happier...
when I see your words...

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

3 posted 2003-04-20 09:55 PM

it sux that last days are oft what lingers.... love yuh writes as always

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

4 posted 2003-04-20 10:08 PM

There are some here, that need this message.

Its a lovely thing that you impart...I hope they read this, Core.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

5 posted 2003-04-20 10:20 PM

thoughts well written and felt!

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

6 posted 2003-04-21 07:13 PM

Thanks Tanya!

Sunshine - you are so sweet, and I'll always call you friend, thank you!

Walt, thanks guy, luv 'ya too!

Ed, thank you, you know, I'll admit that I didn't think of that while writing this, I'm afraid it was selfishly composed, to overcome my own guilt of watching a sick friend die.

QjQ - thanks!

Core

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