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3 Christines
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3 Christines |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I sit here Slamming acid shots And listening to celtic beats And think to myself Would this day taste the same? If it was seasoned with hope? Instead of aged seagrams And I wonder Will they be enough? Enough to turn bitterness Into learning Hate into forgiveness And pain into strength And I know in my heart Yes My three Christines Can change anything And most of all They change Me |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Jason: ouch . . . know this one too this is amazing - one of your better ones and as for your "three" - rest assured that you realize this . . . *wink* amazing and open write . . . xxoo |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
interesting memoir |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Excellent work Jason wonderful sentiment |
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Gina Culliney Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 170 |
An explosion of emotions placed down on electronic paper, reminding all of the human vunerabilty factor and the love of significant others. Well done. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Gotta know me to hate me............or love me.I'ts the same Jason |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Much emotion.... I enjoyed!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Enjoyed the reading, and like the writing. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Jason, this is a really powerful write. A real punch. I could tell it came from your heart. That very admirable to me when someone writes of hurt that's really been there for them. I wish I could do more of it. But those memories get me down so bad that I hate to even think of them, much less write about them. I would rather think of my Honey-Love, because I get really depressed from the hurtful stuff. Thank you so much for sharing your heart. |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
This is really deep. I enjoyed the read and can only hope that through all your pain, you have been seasoned with a little bit of hope since then. Keep writing. We can only get better. quatro |
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