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Cornflake Happy
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Cornflake Happy |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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~CRUNCH~ Bite into me and ruin my cornflake happy day I am morning madness hunger so eager for your lips I am yellow faced sour without my sugar Leave me unwashed growing the mould of love Milky white skin grows cold refrigerated anger hold me would you? I'm shivering. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sounds like someone is grouchy in the morning without their sugar nice piece of life cut right from the longing heart |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Michelle, yeah i'm grouchy with or without sugar. lol. particularly longing today yes, for a much needed hug. thanks for reading xxx |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
HUG  OT:maple syrup on cornflakes..trust me gotta try it |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
gemma: grrrr I know that crunch - hurts dont it? Bite back . . . If I could make it better I would - all I have are my words for you . . . and this missy - this is amazing writing I love reading you xxoo |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very interesting write, I like this!! Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, yes, cornflakes without the sweetner? Yuck, boring plain cold cereal. Hello Miss grouchygem!  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Gemma, this is so very heartfelt, sweet friend, I always need sugar with my cereal, no matter what the circumstance! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, your writes are always so novel and exciting to read, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story ***Shakira*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-08-2003 10:06 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Here's a morning hug--"O"--to make you Cornflake Happy!  Huggums, EA |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Raph  i've got a very sweet tooth, will try it. hugs back. xSue, thanks for being u and caring, and wanting to make things better. that makes me feel better! that make sense? lol. xx Chris, glad u liked, thanks for stopping by. xx Kacy, lol "miss grouchygem" tis me, its true!  xxNoah, you kind soul, thanks for the supportive words as ever. E.A, awww you special little thing, i'm smiling now. xx |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah...good stuff here |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Now, gemjop, don't you talk like that about our sweet little Gemma.  She never could be grouchey or unsweet!! She's always nice and as sweet as sugar!  A good write, little Lady.  Hugs to you, my friend  Ethel Mae [This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-09-2003 02:14 PM).] |
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Chris- Member
since 2003-06-09
Posts 52 |
I love the play on words but i must admit i hate cornflakes im more of a crunchberry person........(no pun intended) |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
A cool write, Suggest you try the syrup.and a little coffee. Jason |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well, lots of nice metaphors that could go a couple of ways in meaning....nice! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
' i am morning madnes hunger so eager for your lips'. very good and immediate words, you write almost with frenzy. rose. |
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