»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #26
»
Im not going to conform myself
| Open Poetry #26 |
|
Im not going to conform myself |
|
|
SarBear Member
since 2003-06-05
Posts 205Massachusetts 
|
I’m not going to conform into what you want I’m sick of being taught I cant be perfect I cant even try It just brings me down I know what you want And I try to be that But how can I be what you want me to be? When I know I’m not I don’t care how much you mean to me I’m sick of doing exactly what you need I know you want the gratification that I’m great But maybe I’m not I want to be who I am I don’t want to be like you I don’t want my life to be perfect I don’t care I just want to be me And in todays society Its so hard to be free But I can try But there are always stop signs in my way Whistling my life away I cant believe that the two people I trust most in the world wouldn’t want me to be me I hate my life Because it isn’t fair All the ones that are older don’t care They control you They think they are great In age they have wisdom But they are missing so much I know more than them about today And today is what matters They all stick in the past And they don’t look at whats here |
||
| © Copyright 2003 Sara Connolly - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
just be your self,,, and keep writing your feelings... Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
||
|
crimson tear Member
since 2003-06-07
Posts 76Massachusetts |
not bad..once again some excess words or lines that could have made the piece flow better with their abscence. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
