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Strummer, Shuffle
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Strummer, Shuffle |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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Strummer of my heart drumming~ Shuffle on the shelf complacing~ Echoes in the rafters glaring~ Prune me like a rose entwined~ Curl around the vine pining~ Run off through the sky reaching~ Towel off my tears indulging~ Water down around me merging~ Turn my eyes to blue insisting~ Briefly for a time fulfilling~ [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (06-07-2003 02:28 AM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
And looking for your posts with longing... If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kinda like a dozen different emotions all going off at the same time... as a shuffle might evoke..or emulate... I like all the pieces... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely Lori....very nicely presented. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Greetings Bluesygirl....wonderful write. A pleasure to read. hugs, Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Poe_Pot_Pie Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 107Canada |
Very interesting. Even exciting in an odd way. I give it two thumbs up! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank for the looking, Larry~ and for sharing the brightest star~ Barry~ I'm so pleased that you read my intentions in all the right directions. Thanks for your knowing reply. Nancy~ Your lovely makes me feel that way~ Hugging you for that~ Evening Nightshade~ I thank you for your pleasure. I do, I do. Hi Poe~ Pot_Pie Exciting and odd! That's nice to hear, and more to the point, your reply made me feel good. I know how much I enjoy reading a poem that effects me on different levels. I'm glad I came close...... ~welcoming you~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
BluesSerenade - I thought your eyes were full of deep blue... BC |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lori...So that's how you do the stummer shuffle!  |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
I was surprised to find myself tapping my toes and then going back for another read...Absolutely delightful... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lori, welcome home!!  I hope you enjoyed your vacation. You taught us a new song with this write.... with a dance to go along with it. It was like my feet wanted to move in a slow shuffle.... and I thoroughly enjoyed it, too  Hugs to you, Lady Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-07-2003 12:25 AM).] |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
This is very different of you. Lots of different thoughts, but you keep them all together. I like it very much. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Hey Bluesy missed you much missy ahhh . . . this is bittersweet . . . missed your singing I have tweets xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! loved the format! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Hi BluesSerenade, Gee, I wish my mind strummed and shuffled that smoothly. If I was looking up into them rafters and shelves, shuffling away, reaching for the blue sky, I would probably start slipping on that merging water, and fall down, onto that rose bush, that badly needed some pruning! Luckily, I’d have that towel for the tears. As I carefully tried to get unentwined. All the while, my heart drumming, in a somewhat fulfilling way, be it ever so briefly... Yikes! I’m sorry, I’m on some pretty strong cough syrup tonight... (hiccup!) I really liked this BluesSerenade! I hope you had a great trip. It’s nice to see you back! Richy [This message has been edited by Richy (06-07-2003 05:00 AM).] |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I never learned that tune, but I'm pretty sure I can play it by ear...... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
fabulous write,,, Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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