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bslicker
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state of mind

0 posted 2003-06-06 08:00 AM


still eyes


when our eyes gazed
upon each other
gleaming deep thru
you were the only one
deep within my heart
life always blooming
as a garden of roses
surrounded by smiles
of your beauty
your words etched
upon the silk papers
worlds now our own
just a glance
a glimmer
our eyes again see
mirrored reflections
eyes of the past
your beauty once again
feeds the roses
deep within my heart
reaching for yours
I love you
still.
.
.
.
.
bernie




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Patricia
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1 posted 2003-06-06 08:14 AM


Lovely write expressed from your heart.  A beautiful softness.

Much enjoyed.


Patricia

littlewing
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2 posted 2003-06-07 02:19 PM


Bernie:

it was one word of this entire write that got to me:

still

me too Bernie
nice write
xxoo

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-06-07 02:21 PM


still
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-06-07 02:22 PM


Beautiful Bernie...much enjoyed.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2003-06-07 03:49 PM


That is the truth about love, Bernie,
True Love never dies~
*s

nice writings
M

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