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Sad Eyes |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Sad Eyes the saddest eyes I have ever seen are pasted across the night time taught stars how to cry with tears glowing from one dark crevice to another |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I really liked this. It is a sad poem but well written. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
That was amazing. The imagery is beautiful and the words are meaningfully heartfelt. Lovely. Junior Member, yv |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautifully sad |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
A whole universe, filled mainly with darkness? It does have a rather empty feel about it. Hopefully, as in life, the majority of those sparkling lights, aren’t always sad, but instead, bright glimmers of hope. |
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chinesestone Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 76China |
your poems are very good.  hugs |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I believe that the stars do cry for all the right reasons......Nicely done! |
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