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Greater Pleasures
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
There are greater pleasures offered. The tangles of your hair across my chest. The mystery of your hands. These are gifts. Yet there is more. The taste of our lips...meeting full within their hunger. Our skins silent cry to the chill air...as it meets the warmth of our desires. And still...there is more. We merge in opposites...a becoming greater than ourselves. There is more. Just past the grip of these pleasure...to the very edge of who we are. We find it. [This message has been edited by Ericc (05-30-2003 05:10 PM).] |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
That other part of you? Her? Very fortunate, she is. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes...she is very fortunate indeed. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I think she is very fourtunate.  Cold hands means a warm heart |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
your words bring out a hidden smile in me Thanks  M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) And truly...when it comes to your beautiful heart...there truly is so much more we have yet to hear you chortle out! (big hugggssssssss) This is just gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Oh Ericc...each time your words said, "there's more," I was thankful for I would have the opportunity to savor another line of your romantic verse. You know how I feel about your words... Forget? Beautifully romantic, Patricia |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Above and beyond all these pleasures you savour there is still something greater to be found ... I love your creation. It shows your rare quality to put into words what is difficult to express .... all that transcends our earthly boundaries ... I am sure "YOU FIND IT". So very beautiful. Love, Margherita  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I like how you lead the reader into different perspectives with the title and the verses that kept building....very enjoyable. Great name you have Eric |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh Yes, Eric!!! That is the part that Gary and I miss when we have to be apart more than any of the things I wrote in the poem I posted today. Of course, we miss all the other pleasures, but we miss just being together. Hey, that sounds like another poem, huh? Your romantic poetry always inspires me to write more about my Honey-Love. Thank you for that, dear friend. Hugs  Ethel |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I enjoy your poetry SO much....I have been gone(from pip)for awhile, so it's a real pleasure to read you again... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
OH, there you go again Eric! hmm, heart throbbing in rhythm to this one |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Eric, you have found the words that escaped me...thank you so much.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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