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Shady Poet
New Member
since 2003-02-17
Posts 5
USA

0 posted 2003-04-18 04:39 PM



I miss
your sweet kiss
because
a kiss from you
gives me a feeling
that is
so special

a wonderful feeling
that is
so unforgettable

an incredible feeling
that I've never felt before

oh how I wish
to feel your soft lips
brush against mine
so I can experience that
indescribable feeling
all over again

only your amazing kiss
can create
something as beautiful
as this

der is onlee one rain cloud in da sky and its rainin' on meeh...

sumhow i'm not surprised

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2003-04-19 01:20 PM


the long-forgotten art of kissing!
IcyFlamez89
Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 292
Jersey City NJ
2 posted 2003-04-20 11:09 PM


Loved how you managed to arouse such feelings while still allowing our imagination to dream of how  akiss should feel. Beautiful.
carol
Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624
Florida USA
3 posted 2003-04-20 11:11 PM


enjoyed  the reading very much

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2003-04-21 03:21 AM


Sounds like you like that kiss...James
Justbleu
Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
5 posted 2003-04-30 12:28 PM


Those kisses are the best.....
Enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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