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Hopefully Today Before Tommorrow
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Hopefully Today Before Tommorrow |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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How many times must a man be reminded the spring is not only in the bed it is also in the flowers in the trees in the eye of the beholder in the precious realization the world is spending time on others too others that know the will of the word love means to give out of one's needs out of one's heart not out of one's surplus how many times must a man wake-up with the sunrise and realize that dreams are always lonely when they're not shared how many times before he can become the hero of his own self control by searching with the fingers of his heart realizing he is never alone but a part of the shifting whispering winds of consciousness, consciousness that is vacant without love how many times before he becomes a man a man with an open mind and open heart and open arms hopefully today before tomorrow........ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eric... A poem for everyman who searches for meaning and finds that he carries it around with him.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
For what it's worth, I cannot tell you how impressed I am with your thoughts, your writing--and you! Your day has most definitely come, my good man!  Warm hugs, Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a very thought-provoking, deep-feeling write |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
how many times must a man wake-up with the sunrise and realize that dreams are always lonely when they're not shared how many times before he can become the hero of his own self control by searching with the fingers of his heart realizing he is never alone but a part of the shifting whispering winds of consciousness, consciousness that is vacant without love =============================== So howd ya get to be so wise anyway?  Such a lovely, wisdom filled poetic ponderance dear Eric..sure have missed reading you groovy guy.  You're the best I've ever felt ... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ethome A very good write, enjoyed. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling on you.... thank you, Ethome! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
like the lines about giving out of surplus and not from the heart....kinda fits the Canadian political regimen...reminds me of the years of supplying surplus wheat but not following it through for whatever reason until it actually reaches the needy instead of rotting at ports...know I'm going off the handle here but just a thought |
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lost_star Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 114NY, U.S.A |
Very well written. Great piece! |
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