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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-05-25 02:13 AM

She has
wounded dog eyes
whincing at sudden
movement as if
expecting blows

He took more
than her body that day

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (05-27-2003 10:49 PM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-05-25 02:14 AM

let's go kick some butt!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 2003-05-25 04:29 AM

This is sad Sir Raph.

hugs

Maree

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2003-05-25 06:49 PM

Aenimal~
I've seen that look ... and you describe it so well~

Excellent piece~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-05-25 06:53 PM

Dix don't tempt me

Thanks, Maree it is,written for an old friend. But I'm proud of her and how far she's come

Marge thank you very much

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-05-25 08:48 PM

Raph:

and what a amazing friend you are . . .
Has she seen this? She should . . .
to appreciate what you see and
I must say that I harbor a love/hate relationship with this one myself

Amazing - as always
xxoo

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

6 posted 2003-05-25 08:51 PM

I can't say I can totally relate..but to an extent..you are an amazing friend Raph and I'm sure you will move your friend to tears with this..keep this up please..you are so elegant with your words even when it hurts too much...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-05-25 09:09 PM

Raph, more and more I see your tender and
compassionate heart showing. When you care for
someone, you really care!! Don't you?
I like that. Even though this one hurt, ot
was so tenderly written that it is beautiful, friend.

Hugs,

Ethel

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2003-05-26 12:51 PM

I wish I didn't know that helpless look~

This is a fine example of pointed expression.

Well done, Raph~

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

9 posted 2003-05-26 08:44 PM

Thanks Sue nice to see you back, no she hasn't yet

Thanks Kris I try to be but don't always succeed

Thanks Ethel see the response above grin

Thanks Blues wish you didn't either

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

10 posted 2003-05-27 11:55 AM

well done

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

11 posted 2003-05-27 11:58 AM

thanks brad

GavinKidd
Junior Member

since 2003-02-14

Posts 44
NH

12 posted 2003-05-27 04:19 PM

excellent image however sad, great work...

Kidd

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

13 posted 2003-05-27 05:24 PM

Hi Aenimal -

I have a suggestion for this, hope you don't mind (if you do, just ignore me!).

and that would be to drop the last line. I believe it is inferred.

Peace,

Core

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

14 posted 2003-05-27 10:50 PM

Thanks Kidd

Corinne thanks I agree

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

15 posted 2003-05-28 03:30 AM

hey, kicking butt is my occupation...just let me know (just have to make sure the cameras aren't on so they can't use that against us in court)

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