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Sunshine
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0 posted 2003-05-21 07:09 PM



Maree

I believe she must
Possess legs,
But they are delicately
Designed of springs,
As she bounces when uttering
WOW
Which she does,
Often, when overtaken by a poem…

She, who writes of depth,
With purpose,
Coming in on whisper of wings,
A dark angel who only
Leads us through the dark,
While harboring an inner,
Secret,
Light.

Maree.

If you can
But imagine
A dark flame
Of beauty

You are seeing, in
Your imagination,
Dark Angel,

A poetess
Of de’light.

© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-05-21 07:12 PM


very nice write "K"  i enjoyed it very much.


ty 4 the web,s

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A thought from a friend is treasured

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2 posted 2003-05-21 07:26 PM


From what I have gathered from her poetry and replies, this captures her essence beautifully...

Loves 'n hugs to you both!
Linda

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3 posted 2003-05-21 07:28 PM


Wonderful tribute to our Maree...I know it will make her shine even more brightly.  
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4 posted 2003-05-21 09:00 PM


She is definitely a "Down Under Delight"... Nicely said, Sunshine...
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5 posted 2003-05-21 10:08 PM


As she bounces when uttering
WOW
Which she does,
Often, when overtaken by a poem…

She, who writes of depth,
With purpose,
Coming in on whisper of wings,
A dark angel who only
Leads us through the dark,
While harboring an inner,
Secret,
Light
==================
well this is just so cool...
and youve captured her spirit well...
one of my fave poets who just doesnt post often enough!!!
Very poetically gracious of you Kari...
we love when ya shine on us.

I refuse to accept that mankind is so tragically bound to the starless midnight of racism & war that the daybreak of peace can never be reality.
MLK

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6 posted 2003-05-21 10:15 PM


...and an exceptional lady and poetess she is....come out and take a bow, Maree
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7 posted 2003-05-21 10:18 PM


How perfect Karilea..
and Maree does say "WOW" too...
She will love this I know...
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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8 posted 2003-05-21 10:22 PM


Very lovely thoughts of a lovely lady. This was sweet of you. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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9 posted 2003-05-22 01:31 AM


Oh My Karilea, you have no idea what you have done to this girl right now. I'm so deeply touched... thank you so much....it's beautiful and so are you my sunshinygirl, you have me in tears with this wide grin across my face. I wish I could hug you right now.

I'm speechless. Thank you! You've made my day.

Maree


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10 posted 2003-05-22 03:57 AM


nice
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11 posted 2003-05-22 05:12 AM





That was so nice Karilea!

And it couldn’t have been written about a nicer person!


Richy


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12 posted 2003-05-22 09:09 AM


This is really special... I love your choice of words!

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

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13 posted 2003-05-22 05:24 PM


enjoyed
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14 posted 2003-05-22 11:54 PM




(smiles) Oh Karilea, you have spoken of our Maree evr so well, dearest friend, she truly can adjust to the dark and lead us all through as her light can see through any ebony where lies so much comfort and hope! (big hugggsssssss) She is an old soul with a lot of grace, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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15 posted 2003-05-23 12:56 PM


Isn't she though,  all that and more!
Maree and Karilea.  

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16 posted 2003-05-23 01:00 AM



Karilea~
What a beautiful tribute to Maree.
Gotta love her and gotta love this.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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17 posted 2003-05-23 01:02 AM


Sunshine...A fragile beauty in this delicately penned piece. Such a musical quality to it. A wonderful tribute or a delightful look into the innermost part of yourself.  ***Ivy Rose
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18 posted 2003-05-23 01:33 PM


Agreed she's a goddess I lay my offerings of prosciutto and vegemite..grin
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19 posted 2003-05-23 04:41 PM


Oh wow...this is awesome!
Eric

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20 posted 2003-05-23 05:13 PM


Dear poet friends, wow hehe thank you so very much for your lovely thoughts and words, you sure know how to make a girl melt and I'm melting.
to all

Maree

p.s Karilea?

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21 posted 2003-05-24 02:35 AM


Karilea, this is so sweet. You truly are
a very good friend.
Hugs to you both     
Ethel

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