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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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Today I visited your grave Beside you I sat I spoke to you about my news My Son that I carry How much I wish that you were here And had grown with me to now As my life goes on And I surround my self with loved ones There is always a space empty No one could ever fill It is there waiting for that day That reunited we are Up in heaven where you be Looking down over me I feel you keeping me safe Through times I cant explain I want to share your name With my son, For him to know That his mum has a friend That meant everything to her You know you once said You couldnt wait to be uncle Dave Well now you will be Just not one he can see Kick the ball with or cuddle In my heart you live forever I miss you |
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MikeFessel Member
since 2003-04-19
Posts 321Brooklyn, NYC, USA |
Whiskey, Oh reading this I broke into tears! This is so very sad. But beautiful too. The last few lines keep echoing in my head. What a poem. And how my heart goes out to you!  Mike |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Julie, this poem really touched my heart. There is such an ache from your heart felt from it. My thoughts and prayers are with you, Julie.  Heart hugs,  Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A very moving piece of writing---VERY! A special bond like that cannot be broken--even in death. He will still be an uncle to your son as he grows--in fact, your son will have his own personal angel sitting on his shoulder and watching out for him. Sending you lots of love, healing hugs, and a rainbow of protective light for the safe delivery of your beloved son... Linda P.S. A gorgeous pic ! You are as beautiful outside as you are inside!  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Whiskey, so nice to see you, and so glad that you could share this part of a life with us. Stories are wonderful ways to pass down a child's heritage of his or her relatives...I am sure your baby will never tire of hearing of the escapades of his Uncle Dave. Thank you for this. |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
so apparently I am going to just cry at everything I read today! Beautiful job whiskey! Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
WOW!! you have me in tears!! I think I read this too soon. Back in February a childhood friend of mine passed away on his way to see me. I know how hard it is whiskey...and I know that no matter how much we try to comfort you..it will never fill that empty spot. Ever since Ronnie died..I keep a song in my heart.."what a day that will be...when my Jesus I shall see..when He takes me by the hand and leads me to that promise land." You will see your friend there, and I will my Ronnie. Until then..carry him in your heart and know that a true friendship goes beyond the physical bond. I am so sorry this is happening to you..i wouldnt wish it on my worst enemy. Everytime you see the gray clouds part a bit and the sun shining through..its your friends smiling down from above. miriam coronado |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
How beautiful to share all the bounty of life with those that we miss. Such heartfelt touch in this work Julie. Wonderful. TD |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"In my heart you live forever." This is beautiful...James |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
thoughts and memorys well written QjQ |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Oh Julie, I am so sorry for your loss. He sounds like he was a truly special person. You know, our character, and being for that matter, is formed largely by those we have interacted with throughout our life. Especially those closest to our heart. They are the most influential. So in that way, your son will know, and be influenced, by your dear friend Dave. Through you. Julie, this was such a sad, but truly loving tribute... You both, were truly blessed, to have each other, in your lives... Take Great Care, Richy |
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