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Drexler_McStyles Member
since 2002-11-18
Posts 195Venice, Ca |
the properties of tequila and sludge come out to about the same if you miss that 2:15 AM call the one where the knock on your door inevitably equates to an explosion from the primary weapon depot but no, there you are slobbering on a pillow as our heroine clicks those heels along that dew laden walkway sighing her way back to some sparkling chariot parked in the red zone waiting on them is a mistake but missing their call is as daft as a vow to celibacy [This message has been edited by Drexler_McStyles (05-21-2003 10:45 AM).] |
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CaseyLeigh Junior Member
since 2003-05-15
Posts 48 |
oh dear... |
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Drexler_McStyles Member
since 2002-11-18
Posts 195Venice, Ca |
oh dear...? you shush up little fool, or i'll naw on your hips and give you the scarlet face s-choir |
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CaseyLeigh Junior Member
since 2003-05-15
Posts 48 |
don't you tell ME to shush, Mr. Doherty. |
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Drexler_McStyles Member
since 2002-11-18
Posts 195Venice, Ca |
why dont you go blush or something, before I come up there and start lapping up your succule..nevermind....hohoho...17 more days.. why are we making a public spectacle of ourselves? isnt that what reality TV is for? Stevie |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
er...scuze me? smile. Enjoyed the poem. AND the replies.  |
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CaseyLeigh Junior Member
since 2003-05-15
Posts 48 |
a public spectacle of ourselves? last time i checked you were the only one making all of the slinky comments, steven. -cassandra |
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JingleBear Member
since 2003-05-08
Posts 76Pennsylvania, USA |
Umm... really open comments, huh? Any way... I thought this was a very amusing piece! |
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