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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2003-05-19 10:49 PM



Black hair shining
like a cold night wind,
a body to turn other women
to sin,
cocained eyes
like blue sapphires;
I thought,
"this woman is the devil
in drag".

©2003 by icebox

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-05-19 10:57 PM


liked this very well  great write

Poetry gives us relief, We give poetry reason.

Saunni
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2 posted 2003-05-19 11:06 PM


Cool write here I believe this is the first I have read of yours. Great write.

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

icebox
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3 posted 2003-05-19 11:13 PM


QjQ ~ I am glad you enjoyed it.

Saunni ~ Thank you for reading my poem and for your comment.

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2003-05-19 11:15 PM


icebox - like your thoughts in this write...

BC

icebox
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5 posted 2003-05-19 11:29 PM


Bill Charles ~ Thank you for reading and for your comment.
BluesSerenade
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6 posted 2003-05-20 01:17 AM


Wickedly, this~
passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-05-20 03:49 AM


cool!
icebox
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8 posted 2003-05-20 12:30 PM


BluesSerenade ~
                  ~~ Glad you both enjoyed this.
passing shadows ~


(Neither of you owns a black wig, do you? )

*laugh*

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