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dreambuilder
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since 2003-03-23
Posts 319
caddyshack

0 posted 2003-05-15 05:41 PM


I was...
Loved
Needed
Wanted
Destiny

I was...
Bold
strong
Caring
Spontaneous

I was...
Sure
Unique
Passionate
Irreplaceable

I was...
Wrong


. . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream  . . .

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Richy
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050

1 posted 2003-05-15 05:52 PM



The only wrong would have been, to not let yourself feel these things...

You can never be wrong, by feeling human...

I like your style Dream!


Richy


Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2003-05-15 07:04 PM


I was
saddened
by this,
but glad to see you let it spill down the page
in release.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-05-15 07:31 PM


So much said in so few words...
I'm so sorry you were hurt...not wrong..hurt.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2003-05-16 04:41 AM


oh God, this hurts
Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
5 posted 2003-05-16 04:48 AM


it sure hurts...

regards
sudhir

dreambuilder
Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319
caddyshack
6 posted 2003-05-16 04:49 AM


thank you everyone - it hurt to write
but it had to come out

I truly apreciate your reading & commenting

[This message has been edited by dreambuilder (05-17-2003 01:51 AM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
7 posted 2003-05-16 05:07 AM


dream:

ohhh curse the woman
you are better than this
and maybe it is her that was . . .
this does hurt A LOT
xxoo

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
8 posted 2003-05-16 03:51 PM


. . .  this needs to breathe . . .
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