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Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

0 posted 2003-04-13 03:58 PM

My love, please go
to the well of my soul
For it overflows with tears
of sad yesteryears.
Do not drink of it just yet
as it is toxic.
You were called upon
to extract the poisons.
With love and patience,
it can be purified.
Then you may sip
of the authentic me.

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2003-04-13 04:02 PM

WOW!!!What a stunning way to speak of the pain in your heart and how love can heal even the most damaged heart....Wonderful...

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

2 posted 2003-04-13 04:15 PM

Pat,

Wonderful in more ways than one.

The concept is beautiful in this.
I enjoy your writing a great deal.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

dreambuilder
Member

since 2003-03-23

Posts 319
caddyshack

3 posted 2003-04-13 11:35 PM

I especially liked this:

With love and patience,
it can be purified.
Then you may sip
of the authentic me

look forward to more

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-05-07 06:29 PM

Nice writing...James

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2003-05-07 06:43 PM

Patricia, toxic?

Perhaps only to
the unenlightened...

and this...
should shed the appropriate
light on the subject.

Enjoyed this, my friend...

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

6 posted 2003-05-07 06:52 PM

May these beautiful and powerful words you write serve as a cleansing to your deep spiritual waters...and to those who read them. Thank you.
Eric

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

7 posted 2003-05-07 07:30 PM

Pat,

I liked this the first time and even more now.

Absolutely, yes, toxic...

I do understand that 100%.....

Love your mind....Hugs, Pat

Shlee
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since 2003-02-16

Posts 72
USA

8 posted 2003-05-07 07:32 PM

I REALLY like this. Very nice.

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

9 posted 2003-05-07 08:16 PM

Very cool poem. I really really liked this! Nicely done

Tara

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

10 posted 2003-05-07 09:01 PM

Patricia - do not yet yesteryear bind thee, for the future brings promise always. Hope all is well with you...

BC

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

11 posted 2003-05-08 05:27 AM

Patience lets the overflow
of tears evaporate
Culminating in the clouds
awaiting their escape
Streaming down in torrents pure
to quench a lover’s thirst
Moistening our lips so parched
A kiss felt like the first

Richy

Sonic
Junior Member

since 2003-05-06

Posts 13
Victoria, Australia

12 posted 2003-05-08 06:08 AM

knowing the poison first hand this spoke volumes. thank you patricia.

MikeFessel
Member

since 2003-04-19

Posts 321
Brooklyn, NYC, USA

13 posted 2003-05-08 05:39 PM

Patricia,
Oh great, great poem! Oh that all our poisons can all be purified by another.I believe it is true, I really do!

Mike

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