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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-05-14 10:47 AM



And She Walks Soft Thundered …
~*Marge Tindal*~

And she walks soft thundered
on rolling clouds of discontent
Sending messages to rain the earth
in her sorrowful lament~

Fills the vessel to overflowing
in wisdom that I must comprehend
SkyeLara’s voice from the spirited sky
sends me in search of new Earth-mend~

Lightning fast she parts the clouds
as I hear her soft thundered roll
Mankind must conscientiously tend
before the storm runs
the full wrath of her soul~



~SkyeLara's message comes to remind us that we do not yet tend this precious Earth the way we should~
May 2003

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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1 posted 2003-05-14 10:57 AM


Yes Marge, she is busy
washing off the dirt
we leave behind...

thank you for this lovely reminder
that we must tend to what is only
in our possession for such a short
time...

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2 posted 2003-05-14 11:03 AM


May we not just hear her message, but truly listen...

Warm hugs,
Linda

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3 posted 2003-05-14 12:12 PM


I enjoyed the vision in this one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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4 posted 2003-05-14 12:21 PM


Enjoying your spirit works Marge...
The cleansing in all it's softer sides, and deliberate acclamations!  TD

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5 posted 2003-05-14 02:14 PM


Dear Marge:  So very true!  I wonder if we will ever learn!

Love
Betty Lou

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6 posted 2003-05-14 02:36 PM


a well written message

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

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7 posted 2003-05-14 02:38 PM


Very well spoken Marge...great message.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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8 posted 2003-05-14 03:14 PM


awesome writing ladyfriend!
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9 posted 2003-05-14 03:26 PM


This is lovely, Marge! I haven't had the pleasure of reading one of your Native American poems in a while. It's a breath of fresh air!

Cor

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10 posted 2003-05-14 04:13 PM


This is so pretty .. and true.
Love,
Betty

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11 posted 2003-05-14 05:29 PM


Marge...You know how I love Native American poems. This is just so exquisite. Beautiful imagery throughout ***Ivy Rose
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12 posted 2003-05-14 06:21 PM


nice
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13 posted 2003-05-14 07:55 PM


Very powerful and moving.
Eric

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14 posted 2003-05-15 09:56 AM


The Earth grows ever more artificial... and now, we wear raincoats so we don't feel the rain when it falls.  For some reason, it bothers us.  Along the same lines, a soldier is taught never to look in the eyes of his enemy...

Poets are the unacknowledged legislators of the world.
~Percy Bysshe Shelley

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15 posted 2003-05-15 01:18 PM


Marge/sis

This muse is always so wise and deep...so like you!  

Marge Tindal
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16 posted 2003-05-27 09:01 PM


Friends~
SkyLara and I thank you for your beautiful replies~
I am but the vessel that she pours her thoughts in~
My mission is to share~
Thank you for allowing me to do so.
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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