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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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wild whip-wind of capturing head in thrust of song you sing storm the stage and splash the knee and bend as low as you can go... just one finger beckoning rolling hills of hip to side now we sing a lullabye rolling me on home to you... tra la la... la-la, home la-la La (la) once again la-la, there, on my own... in the seal of the tomb-- we ever-play dancing n the ashes of a tra-la-la of sing... tiny droplet chiming time as if the wind followed the write drip me down (stalag me tite) la-la-la... and know I'm Home. (hmm..I will just leave it, I suppose. Smile..? I hate most EVERYTHING.) [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (05-13-2003 03:31 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
cute write It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
bless you for yer kindness. grin... |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
nice  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Say what you will...I love it!! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
I really liked this one & stalag-me-tite lol I'll be looking forward to more from the legendary Lady K . . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream . . . |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
aww... I like "stalag me tite," that's so cute and clever. This is sweet, Serenity, even if it's a little bit of an unusual way to describe "home..." A quiet, subtle lullaby... very nice. Parasite Poets are the unacknowledged legislators of the world. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
I always find your work so interesting and this is no different....Well written...you capture my attention and make me think.... |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
yes you better leave it this is making Van Morrison Green  love you lady |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Hopefully this comes out as a compliment. I am not sure what kind of mushrooms you all eat down there in the Big Easy, but your poetry has a tendency to make my brain take off in strange tangents and enjoy the journey. Still taking notes here. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Much better than the lyrics to the Tra-la-la theme for the Banana Splits..nevermind not making lite just brought up that song..powerful writing K don't change a word |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
K - ok - I think I got this one: bringing you back home singing and dancing to the place where your heart belongs if your taking shrooms and I understand this then something is definitely wrong with me . . . Raph lol - hehehe I loved that show! wild journey K xxoo |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Actually. hmmm. I should just thank you all for tolerating me. But I won't.  Baby? Van Morrison ain't the only one green!  (see what I'll do for you?) But actually, I am not as mad as people think. Sue? Beaming at you for your understanding--but how could ya not? tra la la, l-la? (serenity takes her humble bow...) [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (05-14-2003 05:02 AM).] |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
You do not hate most everything. I have it on good authority you love P.S. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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