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Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

0 posted 2003-05-12 07:10 AM

sleeping
so
light

she'll
wake
if I
touch

the
form
of her
calling
in the
dark

she'll
wake

let my
hand
edge
close

close

touch
her
breath

[This message has been edited by Ratleader (05-12-2003 09:05 AM).]

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

1 posted 2003-05-12 07:22 AM

touch her breath...

such a lovely thought... and a striking image

regards,
sudhir

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 2003-05-12 08:08 AM

A breath of fresh air..

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2003-05-12 08:39 AM

Ratleader
Now that is a light touch, enjoyed.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2003-05-12 10:17 AM

Ed...connected by a breath...lovely!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2003-05-12 10:54 AM

Ed~
I found myself 'holding mine' as I read~
I now exhale *thank you's*~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Trish Herrick
New Member

since 2003-05-09

Posts 8

6 posted 2003-05-12 10:57 AM

Ed,

Such love you can write in so few words.

This is wonderful. Your weave with delicate threads produce strong images and melt my heart. So touching.

Hugs, Trish

AKA, Pat (regards2you)

I use Trish because the folder colors work...saves much time..regards' cookies crumbled and I can't fix them..

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

7 posted 2003-05-12 01:46 PM

Liked the scarceness here. Yes, like a breath.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2003-05-12 02:25 PM

This is a little piece of perfection!

Warm hugs,
EA

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2003-05-12 02:35 PM

Ok, you guys have got to let up on the steam I'm seeing in here! Sheesh! A gal's got to work, y'know? Between you, Ericc, and a few others...we can't see straight!

Ah shucks, never mind...keep up the good work!

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

10 posted 2003-05-13 08:00 AM

Wonderful!
Eric

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

11 posted 2003-05-13 03:38 PM

I don't know which is more beautiful... the words, the moment captured... or the love that creates both. *S*

But I do know this epitomizes perfection. *S*

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