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DragonFang
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since 2000-03-09
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0 posted 2003-05-12 02:53 AM


Lost in a house of mirrors
The exit nowhere to be found
Within my soul the tears swell
I fall to the ground

My throat like a desert
My thoughts a noose
Griping firmly to reality
I simply let loose

http://www.heisen.net  Peace Through War, it is beginning!


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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
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1 posted 2003-05-12 02:57 AM


enjoyied

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-05-12 03:45 AM


wow! an awesome write...and maybe it's good to let loose sometimes...just to survive
Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
3 posted 2003-05-12 03:58 PM


This one is a keeper.....
Enjoyed!!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


quatro
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since 2003-04-29
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4 posted 2003-05-12 04:20 PM


So glad to hear that you have found it in you to let loose of your inhibitions and experience reality.  Wonderful write!

quatro

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